Once you’ve reviewed the salary offer and entire benefits package, you may wish to initiate a negotiation.
If you prefer to negotiate verbally, you may write to the hiring manager using the following template:
Thank you for the time to review this offer! I’m excited to discuss the opportunity to work at [X company], and I’d love to go over a couple of items in the offer package with you. Would you have time for a short phone call in [provide time frame]?
From here, you can use the other tips in this “How to Negotiate” section and the “Language to Use” section further down this page to navigate a verbal negotiation.
If you prefer to negotiate over email, you also have this option. When negotiating over email, it’s crucial to have an increased awareness about your tone and the clarity of your language. When negotiating over email, it’s important to preserve your rapport and good candor with the hiring manager, and lapses in professional tone or clarity can have a negative impact.
When using the language presented in this “How to Negotiate” section and the “Language to Use” section further down this page, an email negotiation will be most successful if you utilize the following format:
Step One: Begin your email message with positivity. Refer to something specific from the hiring process that affirms your desire to work for the organization. This emphasizes to the employer that you are beginning the negotiation from a place of mutual alignment – that you want this arrangement to work out for the same reasons that they do.
Example beginning to a negotiation email:
Hello Taliah,
Thank you for the time to review this offer package! I’m really excited by the opportunity to work for Food Justice Nonprofit. Through my conversations with you and your team, I feel deeply aligned with the organization’s mission and the compassionate, social justice lens through which everyone approaches their work.
Step Two: In the next paragraph, state your negotiation. Be clear about what you’re asking for and why. Remember that this is a request, not a demand or an ultimatum: you want to ask if they have the ability to consider your request.
Example negotiation statement:
Before I officially accept the offer for the Community Engagement Leader role, I want to discuss the base salary. Through my research, I’m looking for an offer closer to $50,000 – $52,000. Given my five years of public health communications and successful community organizing experience, which exceeds the minimum requirement of three years of experience for this role, would you have flexibility to move to this salary range?
Step Three: End the email by thanking them for considering your request. Indicate that you’re open to further conversation, but be prepared that the hiring manager may have a preference to pivot the conversation to a phone call once you introduce your negotiation request.
Keep this section brief, but aim for ensuring a similar positive tone that you achieved in the first paragraph of the email.
Example ending to a negotiation email:
I appreciate you taking the time to consider my request. I’d be more than happy to discuss this further with you!
Sincerely,
Maya Monseth